Ok so i'm starting a new chapter and in the last chapter it was the night before when this chapter is picking up. The girl had a really rough night. (This was really hard to explain so sorry if it didn't make any sense)
Jasmine was standing facing the right side of the sea. The Caribbean was beautiful in the morning, the bright aquamarine colored water, the distant sight of land, and the salty smelling air. Yet she felt horrible.
Help with starting sentences???!?
That sounds good...
Start with the setting to introduce the feel of the chapter...
The Caribbean was beautiful in the morning with the bright aquamarine colored water, the distant sight of land, and the salty smelling air. Jasmine was standing facing the right side of the sea. Yet she felt horrible.
I like how it sounds. It provides a good contrast between Jasmine and the sea. There is a good transition too!
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