What do you think?just saw the story in my email...?

Daniel and Jasmine are sitting alone in


the park


one night....


Daniel: I guess we are the left overs


in


this


world


Jasmine: I think so... All of my


friends


have


boyfriends and we are only the 2


persons


left in


this world without any special person


in


our lives


Daniel: Yup I don't know what to do


Jasmine: I know! We'll play a game


Daniel: What game?


Jasmine: i'll be your girlfriend for


30 days


and you


will be my boyfriend


Daniel: That's a great plan in fact i


don't


have


anything to do for the following


weeks...





DAY 1:


They watch their first movie and they


both


touched


in a romantic film





DAY 4:


They went to the beach and had a


picnic...Daniel


and Jasmine had their quality time


together





DAY 12:


Daniel invited Jasmine to a circus and


they rode


on


a Horror House....Jasmine was scared


and


she


touched Daniel's hand but she touched


someone


else's hand and they both laughed...





DAY 15:


They saw a fortune teller down the road


and they


as

What do you think?just saw the story in my email...?
I think that was a beautiful story and have starred it, but I dont think the rest of the crowd quite understood
Reply:Very sad. Poor Jasmine. Have to go through life as a spinster......................
Reply:Doesn't seem to have a point to it I didn't care much what happened to them. It didn't seem real and I didn't care about the characters because I didn't know them very well....





Sorry!!
Reply:Waiting for the rest....








Okay....








What the hell?
Reply:I just got goose bumps all over!!!
Reply:What an absolute load of old rubbish.


You will never make it as a writer; as a purveyor of crap, yes, what a waste of time.
Reply:Delete it from your box and block the sender.
Reply:am gonna print this off and read it to my five year old boy as a bed time story tonight
Reply:aww, I have few tears in my eyes.





its actually a very very nice story. I love it!!!! but I wonder what happens with the girl, I hope she is okay.





who wrote it? its nice.
Reply:Someone should confiscate your ENTER key.
Reply:ok and then what happen sweetie?
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Reply:No offense, but there doesn't seem to be a point and it's rather melodramatic.
Reply:Then the emergency buzzer goes off and the crash team run in and save Daniel's live. Three cheers for the crash team, and Jasmine is so happy she just relaxes, and drinks her apple juice.

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